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انا سويتهم بس أبي مساعدتكم في التصحيح وخصوصآ الأسلوب والأخطاء الإملائيه
أول واحد عن الــ Human Cloning
وكان المطلوب تعريف الــ Human cloning وتبيان الآراء المختلفه عن هذا الموضوع واخر شي الرأي الشخصي
وهذا هو نص الموضوع
Human cloning is the process of creating a wholly human body or makes copy of specific parts of the human body such as heart and kidney. This matter is controversial. On the one hand, some people think it is good for the uses of medical treatment as a therapy for stroke, diabetes and many other internal diseases. Also, cloning of spare parts is important because we can use the spare parts such as, kidneys, livers, hearts and cells for the sick people. On the other hand, many people disagree with that because it's immoral and seems to taken God roll. In addition, it is very dingers and had many risks. Finally, in my opinion I think Cloning a whole human body is completely prohibited even if it is for the purpose of treatment. However, if it is only cloning of specific parts of the human body such as heart and kidneys, for the purpose of treatment, this is permitted and actually recommended and rewarded by Allah
والموضوع الثاني عن Ancident against human right---- حادثه ضد حقوق الإنسان
واعطونا بعض المعلومات اللي من خلالها نشكل فقره لاتقل عن 80 كلمه
وانا سويتها بس صارت اقل من 80 فياريت احد يساعدني في التصحيح وإضافة بعض الأشياء عشان تكمل الفقره
هذي المعلومات اللي في السؤال
6th June, 2005---------When
Addis Ababa, Ethiopia, university campus --------Where
Student, police, journalists-----------------Who
Protesting about government election result ---------------Why
1500people in demonstration; police opened fire; 26 killed; 100s injured-----------------What
وهذي الفقره اللي كتبتها
On 6th June, 2005, an ancient against human right happened in the university campus in Ethiopia the capital of Addis Ababa. There were many people involved in this ancient such as, student, police, and journalists. 1500 people protested against government election result. Therefore, the police opened fire and as a result 26 people were killed and 100s were injured. That was one of the worst ancient that had happened in the world.
هلا أختي أم محمد
Ancient is different from old
if some thing is ancient that mean before more than 500 years ago
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about your topic I would try to give you some ancient events that have happened for a long time:-
1-In ancient Egypt there has been lot of criem agnaist the humans, but the most important event as the archaeologist assumed was making people built the pyramids during a long time such as without giving them any rights.
2- in the time of Alokhdood in south of saudi arabia there are famous story in Holly Quran which taking king what the king of Yemen did with the christians to change their new belief that time,and this good one for you
HeLp Me in My writing
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رد: HeLp Me in My writing
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